Friday, April 28, 2017

My love poem choice

I Love You


I love your lips when they’re wet with wine 
And red with a wild desire; 
I love your eyes when the lovelight lies 
Lit with a passionate fire. 
I love your arms when the warm white flesh 
Touches mine in a fond embrace; 
I love your hair when the strands enmesh 
Your kisses against my face. 

Not for me the cold, calm kiss 
Of a virgin’s bloodless love; 
Not for me the saint’s white bliss, 
Nor the heart of a spotless dove. 
But give me the love that so freely gives 
And laughs at the whole world’s blame, 
With your body so young and warm in my arms, 
It sets my poor heart aflame. 

So kiss me sweet with your warm wet mouth, 
Still fragrant with ruby wine, 
And say with a fervor born of the South 
That your body and soul are mine. 
Clasp me close in your warm young arms, 
While the pale stars shine above, 
And we’ll live our whole young lives away 
In the joys of a living love. 


I picked this poem because it has a very deep connection between the person who is writing this poem and the person they are talking about. It uses food and drink imagery with the wine to describe how much they desire their lips when they are looking at them. You could say the person writing this poem has some sort of "illness" because they seem to have an obsession with the person they are talking about that is very powerful. The love portrayed in this poem seems very true and is a poem that is easy to understand. The person does a good job of using many types of imagery to make me feel as though I'm experiencing this experience with them.

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  2. I really enjoyed the poem that you picked, Personally I thought that it was beautiful. I also agreed that some people would say that there may be some sort of illness going on because of how much the person loves the other and seems obsessed but I also think that, that would be the way the person in the poem shows love to one another. Do you think that it is unhealthy to show love that deeply in a relationship? Like you said, the imagery is so vivid about the food and drink I think that it really does help show us how to person feels and what they really think about the other person included in they poem. I think you blog post was really well-written and that really do understand the poem and that you enjoyed reading it.

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